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Verily, if you do war, you may win or lose, but if you do not do war, your are always lost, that is lost under the domination of others.
PS: Good writing, but if you like to make your writings more professional, there are some rooms to improve more. For that you could do some study/google on "Critical Writing". If you write more critically, your writing would look less biased and generalized, and more acceptable, because you would include different and more people's angle of views backed by more examples, quotes, facts, figures, and references. I am just saying generally, not just specific to this article.
PS: Good writing, but if you like to make your writings more professional, there are some rooms to improve more. For that you could do some study/google on "Critical Writing". If you write more critically, your writing would look less biased and generalized, and more acceptable, because you would include different and more people's angle of views backed by more examples, quotes, facts, figures, and references. I am just saying generally, not just specific to this article.