Need Help to review a book

[Soumitra]

Hi Friends

I have recently written a novel. I plan to send it to publishers. But before that, I want some feedback on the same.

If anyone has the time to read a few chapters and give their honest feedback I will be really grateful.

Please DM me your contact details and I will send a few sample chapters.

PS - I request Pakistanis not ask for the novel because the novel is about a terrorist attack on India and the Pakistanis will not appreciate their portrayal in the novel.

 

[lastofthepatriots]

Thanks for your concern about us.

 

[Ajaxpaul]

Hi Friends

I have recently written a novel. I plan to send it to publishers. But before that, I want some feedback on the same.

If anyone has the time to read a few chapters and give their honest feedback I will be really grateful.

Please DM me your contact details and I will send a few sample chapters.

PS - I request Pakistanis not ask for the novel because the novel is about a terrorist attack on India and the Pakistanis will not appreciate their portrayal in the novel.

What made you write a novel ?

 

[Sully3]

No thank you

 

[Soumitra]

What made you write a novel ?

It was in my mind for a long time. Being on PDF also gave me quite a good number of idea So finally decided to write a novel

No thank you

I already said that Pakistanis will not appreciate the novel so I won't ask them to review

 

[Sully3]

It was in my mind for a long time. Being on PDF also gave me quite a good number of idea So finally decided to write a novel


I already said that Pakistanis will not appreciate the novel so I won't ask them to review

you should write a novel on how Indias is the father of terrorism inside Asia (just ask the sri lankans) and how it has spread systematic terrorism inside Pakistan through Afghanistan for the last 10 years.

Hindu terrorist nation India - should be the name of your novel.

 

[Imran Khan]

send it to republic tv

 

[Spring Onion]

Hi Friends

I have recently written a novel. I plan to send it to publishers. But before that, I want some feedback on the same.

If anyone has the time to read a few chapters and give their honest feedback I will be really grateful.

Please DM me your contact details and I will send a few sample chapters.

PS - I request Pakistanis not ask for the novel because the novel is about a terrorist attack on India and the Pakistanis will not appreciate their portrayal in the novel.

If the request is not for us then you should have posted this on Indian forum . Anyway

 

[Soumitra]

you should write a novel on how Indias is the father of terrorism inside Asia (just ask the sri lankans) and how it has spread systematic terrorism inside Pakistan through Afghanistan for the last 10 years.

Hindu terrorist nation India - should be the name of your novel.

No, my novel is about how a Pakistani Nuclear Scientist's brother got killed in a drone strike by the Americans and then she teamed up with a rogue former ISI Major who recruited her to build a dirty bomb. He got a brainwashed Kashmiri to carry the bomb to Delhi and explode it but his plans were foiled by a clever IB agent from India

 

[Jackdaws]

I am a published author - send me a DM

 

[Soumitra]

If the request is not for us then you should have posted this on Indian forum . Anyway

Lot of Indians out here. And I have made it clear beforehand that Pakistani will not like the novel so if they don't want to review they can skip it

 

[saiyan0321]

Hi Friends

I have recently written a novel. I plan to send it to publishers. But before that, I want some feedback on the same.

If anyone has the time to read a few chapters and give their honest feedback I will be really grateful.

Please DM me your contact details and I will send a few sample chapters.

PS - I request Pakistanis not ask for the novel because the novel is about a terrorist attack on India and the Pakistanis will not appreciate their portrayal in the novel.

Wow indian forum stock must be really low that you come to a Pakistani forum with a novel that doesn't portray Pakistanis well and with a warning sign. Lolzz

My tip. Although content and target audience play a very important role however how you communicate your story/idea to the reader is where its all about.

A mediocre story can reach greater heights with good writing and communication style and a good story can get ruined with mediocre display.

 

[Sully3]

I am a published author - send me a DM

hahahahahahaha

joke of the day

 

[Jackdaws]

hahahahahahaha

joke of the day

Ok.

 

[Soumitra]

I am a published author - send me a DM

Thanks for the help

Wow indian forum stock must be really low that you come to a Pakistani forum with a novel that doesn't portray Pakistanis well and with a warning sign. Lolzz

I am a marketing professional. I have been trained to market your services where your target audience is present. This forum has a large number of nationalistic Indians so it is a perfect place to target my novel.

My tip. Although content and target audience play a very important role however how you communicate your story/idea to the reader is where its all about.

A mediocre story can reach greater heights with good writing and communication style and a good story can get ruined with mediocre display.

Thanks for your tip