Haseebullah
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First "Shair" only uses foolaad as reference,as a means of comparison.
Your's however is talking about it literally.
Forgive me if i assessed it incorrectly,i have always scored lowest in urdu.
mere maqsad mushaira shuru nahi kerna tha
Qasam se yaar,shair parh kar mein pareshaan ho gaya tha,k ab tou thread war gaye!