no i mentioned 'your highlighted sentence, it was grammar mistake
dictatorship with a guy like hazrat umar, i might, but dictatorship of a corrupt guy, it is even worse than corrupt democracy
also there was no need to waste millions of dollars money on cheap activities like youth festival, inviting japanese wrestler and etc because when people are crying for basic things then dont waste money on these pity things like these, there are many hospitals with basic facilities in punjab, a rat devourced a poor new born face shows the basic need for punjab people, shahbaz shareef just did his publicity for such pity things
I think Laptop was waste of money, but Punjab Youth Festival was good, energetic.. Bring lots of smiles, and proud for Pakistan.. And most important, it bring many new professionals close to business man, with their idea... and scholarships, new jobs, so many things.. looks like you didn't follow Punjab Youth Festival.. Any how, yes Punjab needs more hospitals in rural areas not in main cities, they are not getting over populated... But education is one thing where SS should be concentrating more... New university, research labs, and especially new concept into the Punjab.. He should concentrate more on energy shortage, but this time he shouldn't concentrate on the government, and should take charge on this... bring more industry to Punjab... Raise agriculture university level back to what they were before... new technology involvement into crops.. He should complete this computerizing land project as soon as possible, since this is a total mess... He should also try to find more security solutions, like cctv everywhere, camera on signals, improve police processes... so much... I have ....
overall Good Job, but still "sitaron se aggay jahan or b hain"