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Operation Dark target
Chapter 1
It was a cold misty night. 1:20 am in the night, a shadow was walking on the street, there were rows of houses around him. the street didn't show any signs of life
. Shadow was walking carefully, watching every step he took , to avoide any noise that could attract the dogs yawning far away from him. He was searching for something -- suddenly he turned and came back to a small house, like he forgot something
. it was a small house with a dark brown colored, iron door. He knocked thrice on the door but before knocking he made sure no one was there watching him.
Amjad he whispered at door while knocking, a hand came out of the door and grabbed his arm and dragged him inside he would have fallen on that bike standing right beside the door if he wasn’t careful.
What are you doing here Rizwan, have you seen what time is it, it better be something important ? Amjad Asked Rizwan.
Sir It’s important, finally we got him.
We got Him ?
Amjad was in shock he couldn’t believe what his ears just heard, we got him are you sure.
Yes sir Rizwan replied we got him.
Months of hard work finally paid off ISI finally had him. The most wanted Terrorist of Pakistan, hundreds of families lost their loved ones because of this one person. He was behind many bombings, attacks on army, the recent massacre happened in Army School in Peshawar, it all was because of this one person the head of snake. Army was behind him for years tracking every movement he was making He was known by many names and Mullah Radio was one of them. ISI had to work very hard to get his location. Now the real test was about to start getting location of target was one thing but taking him out alive from the bees nest was another. Peshawar incident shock Pakistan and caught Government by surprise.
We need to alert higher command we don’t get that lucky in our kind of business every day. Are you ready Caption?
Sir Yes Sir Rizwan replied
Let me inform Bgr. Tariq.
Bgr Tariq Had spent of most of his life in army, been in spy game for very long time so he know how to deal with them. He was famous for his swift action and showed no mercy to his enemies. He conducted many successful operations and every mission was a success. Whenever he got some his hands on some Taliban he made sure they won’t be able to hurt any other soul again, his methods were questionable but his results were off the charts.
10 January 2015 Pakistan army G.h.Q Rawalpindi, an important meeting was been going on for several hours in room with round table which was occupied by 4 top high rankings officers of Pakistan army so they can chose the best course of action.
Major Ali started the briefing
Gentleman “our sources had informed us that Dark target will be traveling to Pakistan next Week to see the Taliban Initiation ceremony, where 100 new jihadi fanatics will be Joining Threak e Taliban Pakistan (T.T.P).”
And “Make sure we catch this bastard”.
Suddenly the room went into silent mood there was pin drop silence in room no one was talking and suddenly this silence was broken by Brigadier Tariq.
He stood up from his Chair and in firm voice he started to talk.
Gentleman “I have some disturbing news from other side of border, one of our operative just informed us, Dark target is under the protection of Afghan intelligence, that’s why all the past attempts to capture or eliminate him was unsuccessful , and many of our operatives lost their lives. This Time it will be a Black Op, Afghan intelligence won’t be involved in this Op, ISI must eliminate this threat on it’s on and Capitan Khalid one of our best will be in command.”
Khalid.. o Bhai khalid where you heading . Can You get me Some fruits ? Mubashir shouted from the top floor of building . They were in the 6th flat.
Khalid Looked up from stairs saw Mubashir screaming, he raised his hand showing middle finger and walked out of the 5 storey Building.
Capitan Khalid a S.S.G commando was one of the best of his batch, He was trained by the best and spent few months in United States with Marines.
He was master of hand 2 hand combat, swimming champion, Sniper, and spending time with US Marines just improved his skills even more. He’s been in Kabul for few days finding Qasim a local commander in TTP and also provider of Intel to Pakistan intelligence. They were supposed to meet in a famous restaurant in Kabul bazar, But Qasim was no show that made Khalid worried because this wasn't some random info exchange this time the Info Qasim was bringing Directly involved Dark target. He was drinking tea in the restaurant when he felt his pocket was vibrating he Picked his phone up in a jiffy
Yes Khalid Speaking.
Qasim here Khalid “got some news for our friends and a special gift”
Khalid “Gift? “he sounded confused.
Yes My Friend Gift but this gift must be sent home ASAP. Qasim replied
Khalid Saying Good Bye to Qasim went straight to his apartment.
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