ISPR Cringe Unprofessional Press Release No PR-144/2023-ISPR

[Neelo]

What kind of unprofessional language is this?

On 14 September 2023, at 1830 hours, terrorists attacked a post of security forces near Wali Tangi Quetta.

During fire exchange, 3x terrorists were sent to hell. Subedar Qaiser Raheem while fighting valiantly embraced shahadat in the line of duty whereas 1x soldier is seriously injured.

Security Forces of Pakistan will continue to thwart efforts of the enemies of peace and prosperity in the country.

Inter Services Public Relations Pakistan

ispr.gov.pk

 

[Dalit]

Little children that have lost their way.

 

[Jango]

This has been ongoing since the COAS changed. ISPR press releases have become like this.

 

[Cash GK]

What kind of unprofessional language is this?

On 14 September 2023, at 1830 hours, terrorists attacked a post of security forces near Wali Tangi Quetta.

During fire exchange, 3x terrorists were sent to hell. Subedar Qaiser Raheem while fighting valiantly embraced shahadat in the line of duty whereas 1x soldier is seriously injured.

Security Forces of Pakistan will continue to thwart efforts of the enemies of peace and prosperity in the country.

Inter Services Public Relations Pakistan

ispr.gov.pk

They higher some a level idiot. Who thinks he is chatting on whatsapp

This has been ongoing since the COAS changed. ISPR press releases have become like this.

Because they afraid of doing so on tweeter

 

[SD 10]

What kind of unprofessional language is this?

On 14 September 2023, at 1830 hours, terrorists attacked a post of security forces near Wali Tangi Quetta.

During fire exchange, 3x terrorists were sent to hell. Subedar Qaiser Raheem while fighting valiantly embraced shahadat in the line of duty whereas 1x soldier is seriously injured.

Security Forces of Pakistan will continue to thwart efforts of the enemies of peace and prosperity in the country.

Inter Services Public Relations Pakistan

ispr.gov.pk

what is wrong with the olanguage there?

 

[CLUMSY]

what is wrong with the olanguage there?

Sounds too emotionally charged

 

[IceCold]

During fire exchange, 3x terrorists were sent to hell.

How does this *** hole know who will be sent to hell and who won't?

 

[Azadkashmir]

the dollar did not reach the soldiers so they were martyred.
now ispr song for munir fighting on the front line for that fresh whiskey.

 

[Olympus81]

Looks like there is scarcity of smart people within ISPR.

 

[SD 10]

Sounds too emotionally charged

pragmatism will not get you anywhere with afghans! remember you are talking about afghans!

 

[CLUMSY]

pragmatism will not get you anywhere with afghans! remember you are talking about afghans!

True but its important to sound professional in press releases or the entire institution comes off as a joke

 

[maithil]

No proofreading? Looks jingoistic and not worthy of a professional institution.

 

[epebble]

What kind of unprofessional language is this?

On 14 September 2023, at 1830 hours, terrorists attacked a post of security forces near Wali Tangi Quetta.

During fire exchange, 3x terrorists were sent to hell. Subedar Qaiser Raheem while fighting valiantly embraced shahadat in the line of duty whereas 1x soldier is seriously injured.

Security Forces of Pakistan will continue to thwart efforts of the enemies of peace and prosperity in the country.

Inter Services Public Relations Pakistan

ispr.gov.pk

I think there is a certain charm to the language instead of the same old staid boilerplate. If nothing else, it has attracted attention. Would you be discussing any other old memo 683/2023-24/ISPR/ENG?